
Well...here we are on the verge of another Friday. Lots of Fridays in life. Friday is usually a good day. Again...I find myself rambling.
So what is the last book that you have purchased lately?
Mine was the book, "On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction" by William Zinsser. How many of you have read this raise your hand! It has been around for quite awhile, this is its 30th anniversary edition.
I really like this book. It just reinforces all that I believe about writing. I actually have been highlighting the chapters as I read them. I know, I am a real nerd. The first thing I had to highlight was this:
"This is the personal transaction that's at the heart of good nonfiction writing. Out of it come the two most important qualities that this book will go in search of, warmth and humanity."
I believe these are the two most important qualities I look for as well. You can find information anywhere. Anybody can look up a bunch of facts and put them into some logical order or re-hash common knowledge. But not everybody can interact with the reader in such a way that they feel a connection to the human spirit.
I also especially love this part where Zinsser talks about the kind of writing which he delights in finding:
"What I am always looking for as an editor is a sentence that says something like "I'll never forget the day when I..." I think "Aha! A person"
Writers are obviously at their most natural when they write in the first person. Writing is an intimate transaction between two people, conducted on paper, and it will go well to the extent that it retains its humanity. Therefore I urge people to write in the first person: to use "I" and "me" and "we" and "us." They put up a fight."
He then talks about how many areas of writing discourage this and some for good reason. Journalists do not use "I" in their attempts at objectivity. Businesses and institutions do not want "I" in their reports. English teachers frown upon too many "I" centered papers.
What Zinsser recommends is this: "Even when "I" isn't permitted, it's still possible to convey a sense of I-ness. The political columnist James Reston didn't use "I" in his columns, yet I had a good idea of what kind of person he was, and I could say the same of many other essayists and reporters. Good writers are visible just behind their words. If you aren't allowed to use "I" at least think "I" while you write, or write the first draft in the first person and then take the "I"'s out. It will warm up your interpersonal style."
I defintely agree with this premise. One can learn to write in the style and genre necessary for the purpose, but the writing which is most compelling is writing where you get a true sense of the writer as a human being.
I think I want to come back and go through this book more. I am glad I bought it.
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Speaking of writing, I wanted to share some of my writings for this week.
Sometimes it is possible to discover things that can make you feel happy even in the midst of despair. And sometimes these things can be surprising even to yourself.
This post is called, The Happiness Box
I recently heard the sentiment that "We are more than our bodies" and I thought about this especially with relevance to having a chronic illness such as Multiple Sclerosis. Many days I feel that I am my body. So much of who we are is biologically determined. What are your thoughts?
Join the conversation here with my post, which poses the question, "Are we our bodies?"
I hope you all have a great Friday and weekend!
22 comments:
Zinsser's book is definitely a masterpiece. I use it when I teach my college class on writing.
Merelyme,
I bought two books this past week. One was "Writing Down the Bones', I had given my copy away and never got it back.
The other one was for my nephew's 2nd birthday party. It was on Thomas the Tank Engine.
He sat on my lap and I read it to him. I cannot recall in the longest time liking a book so much. It was wonderful to have his little body sitting on my lap, turning pages and saying" Thomas! Thomas!"
I hope I am instilling a life long love of books in him.
Last book purchased... I guess that'd be Leather Maiden by Joe R. Lansdale.
I usually write in 'intimate third', where the narrrative stays third-person but spends the scene in a single perspective, including the worldview, language, education, etc. of the 'head' I'm narrating from.
These days, first-person can be a hard sell in genre fiction...
Sounds like a great book!
The last book I bought was First Among Sequels by Jasper Fforde. It's very clever, and extremely funny. The whole series is great, in fact. About a woman who can enter and live in the world of books. A neat idea 'eh. You have a great weekend too :)
Merely, you sure have a handle on "Warmth and Humanity!" I feel how you feel when I read what you write.
"I'll never forget the day when I..." This phrase supposedly is a one way ticket to the slush pile. It's interesting to hear of an editor looking for it. :) I remember reading the offhand dismissal of the phrase being it always precedes an anecdote.
Love the book. Stole generously from it when I taught composition in college. Ah, those were the days. Spiteful freshman. Box food.
My thoughts are these: I bought Zinsser's book a year ago and never read it. As a result of your thoughts and quotes, I have just gone and dug it out and put it in my bag, just in time for me to catch my train!
So, the ripples of your ramblings spread a wider and wider net!
Thanks.
"The Secret Language of Feelings" by Calvin D. Banyan. Very helpful for me bacause I have very strong emotions. This book explains that feelings are good and have messages for us if we listen. Having spent too many years trying to supress feelings rather than learn from them, this is a healing read.
hey d... have a great weekend, hon!
last book i ordered [today] 'mac os x 10.5 leopard', by robin williams [no, not the comic], cuz i just got a mew imac, and have not updated since 'panther', years back ;) lol
I love Zinsser. Have you read Inventing the Truth? It is an awesome guide for memoir writers.
Conveying a sense of "I-ness." I like that.
Well, the last book I bought was called "The TMJ Connection." How boring. As you can tell, my TMJ problem is rearing its ugly head! No pun intended.
Maybe I'll find something better to read this weekend!
Donnetta
I like this post. I haven't read that book, but you hi-light some excellent points. I'm not a non-fiction writer, but I can appreciate the sense of "I-ness" in my poetry and some of my prose.
Excellent points and samples!
I toggle between "I" writing and a more distanced approach, depending on topic or post.
Latest books purchased, Havana Nocturne and Nixonland, though I've also been given a huge stack of fiction to read, too.
Again, this is great!
A hold over from English teacher's admonitions am I. Don't use so many, I fret, while very sure that I just have.
Though, not being a writer, who is talking in anything I do, if not I to you? Unless unsure of myself, then I becomes one, as in, one should wonder what one means?
My latest reading materials are The Flight of the Falcon by Daphne Du Maurier, Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine, and A Hell of a Woman... I will have to check out the William Zinsser guide.
Merelyme,
Most books on writing are not particularly helpful. Zinsser's is an exception. I read it some time ago--I think it was on the Capitol Limited (the Slow Train for which my blog is named) between Washington DC and Elkhart, IN.
I generally rely on the library for my books--just don't have the cash for purchases. Actually , the last book I actually bought was "Rights in Conflict: The Violent Confrontation of Demonstrators and Police in the Parks and Streets of Chicago during the Week of the Democratic National Convention" (1968), better known as The Walker Report. I'm working on a novel that centers on that week in August, 1968, so it's essentially a reference book.
P.S. Yours is a very well-written and informative blog. And what is it about creative people and depression? Are we more inclined to get it than others, or are we just more likely to admit we get depressed? Or is there another explanation?
Merelyme,
Most books on writing are not particularly helpful. Zinsser's is an exception. I read it some time ago--I think it was on the Capitol Limited (the Slow Train for which my blog is named) between Washington DC and Elkhart, IN.
I generally rely on the library for my books--just don't have the cash for purchases. Actually , the last book I actually bought was "Rights in Conflict: The Violent Confrontation of Demonstrators and Police in the Parks and Streets of Chicago during the Week of the Democratic National Convention" (1968), better known as The Walker Report. I'm working on a novel that centers on that week in August, 1968, so it's essentially a reference book.
P.S. Yours is a very well-written and informative blog. And what is it about creative people and depression? Are we more inclined to get it than others, or are we just more likely to admit we get depressed? Or is there another explanation?
Thanks for sharing about what you are learning on writing. It is interesting and enlightening. Take care and have a great weekend!
I agree totally with Zinsser about the importance of warmth and humanity. Think I would like his book as well. Just about everything I write is in the first person and I've sometimes wondered whether that meant that I'm too self-centered.
I just read 'Happiness Box' this morning while I was looking for this blog. I actually found my old 'happiness box (literally a box of quasi-happy keepsakes) this weekend.There were some things in it that no longer bring happiness and I wonder if that's a good sign or bad? I threw away some stuff I once held dear and now I wonder if that was the right thing to do?
I like writing in first-person. It's interesting to write 1st person from a different age/gender/life...hard ,too.
I am not even sure if I am even my mind, much less my body, but the Bodies Show sounds fascinating and I enjoyed reading your take on it.
So much IS genetically determined, while nuture rounds out the rest.
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